‘पहाड़ की नदी’- प्रेमा गड़कोटी की एक सुंदर रचना

पहाड़ की नदी
पहाड़ी नदी हूँ
अनपढ, बेसगुरी
नहीं है सगूर मुझे बहने का
कहने का
नहीं बह सकती बनाए हुए रास्तों पर,
बाँधों पर
नहीं पहचानती
तुम्हारी बहुमंजिला इमारतें
रिवर व्यू रेजार्ट
पुल और बाँध
मैं जो तुम्हें आती हूँ शान्त नजर कभी
चौमास आते ही
औछ्याट में आ जाती हूँ
भूल जाती हूँ
सगूर फिर कहने का भी
कि आप जरा अपने ये विकास के
पुन्तूरे हटा दीजिए
नजाकत कहाँ है मुझमें
मैं तो गुगाट करते ही आती हूँ फिर
मुझसे पूछकर खोले भी कब हैं
तुमने ये पुनतुरे अपने
कहाँ कोई प्राधिकरण लगा है
मेरे बचाव के लिए
खूब बनाओ मेरे रास्तों में
अपने कमीशनों के किले
पर जब रीस आ जाएगी
तो कहाँ देखुँगी फिर कोई केदार
नाचनी या बाजार
मैं पहाड़ी गाड़ अपने गांवों से कब रिसाई
एक दूरी बनाते हुए
दिशा ध्याण रहीं हूँ उनकी
पर जब भूल गए तुम अपना सगूर
मैं भी बेसगुरी हो गई हूँ ।
प्रेमा गड़कोटी

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